Thank you. As much as I would be interested (depending on what the fanfic was) on helping you, I got a lot of other projects of my own to deal with that I don't want to add anymore to my plate, so I am sorry.
you are awesome.
Thank you :D
Your welcome.
I just want to say several positive things and questions regarding your fanfic "Heroes Unite", and in general.
1: I want to thank you, because this fanfic has also gotten me into Mass Effect.
2: Your portrayal of our many protagonists (Commander Shepard, Master Chief, Laval, Po, Garrus, Eris, etc) is the best.
3: The various references made (like: "Stay out of the restricted section") are perfect.
4: I think I understand why you're not planning on including Red vs Blue.
As for the questions I have to ask.
1: What is Kamen Rider, Super Sentai, and Straw Hats about? I've never heard anything about those before.
2: Is this 'First Civilization' canon in Mass Effect? Or was it your own idea?
3: Do you strong do you think Spartan Augmentation is over Chi?
I have some other things to say and more questions to ask. Which I'm saving for some other time, so I'll send you some more comments some other day.
PS: I just want to say; that moment in Chapter 15; the one where Po asks, "What do you think, a Cerberus soldiers' going to just walk on in here to take a bathroom break and when he's done, we take him?" which did happen. And in The Straw Hats; the moment Hancock, and various other women fall for the Master Chief; The most skilled hero throughout the entire multiverse, and a total, hardcore badass. Those two moments were the moments that made me laugh.
Anyway, talk to ya later. Good Luck.